Smoking

Ocean lights cigarette
Puffs mouthful smoke towards mountain
Tobacco clouds incarcerate the mountain
Later on....
Mountain coughs
Its skins are uprooted
Displaying crystal clear
Cancer-laminated
Black lungs of mountain
Dear buddy
I beg sorry
I don't wanna be another mountain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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February 28, 2016 at 8:13 AM
WELL SAID,, BIRAT.. LINDA
Chakrabarty Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 11:33 AM
You mean passive smoking...right it's a curse.We must read writing on the walls.Enjoyed your poem. welcome to PS.Love. Rajat
Anupam Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 12:23 AM
Thank you so much dear poet Rajat.
Thajudeen Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 1:53 AM
Smoking high as there is fire! Nice poem -Safa
Anupam Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 12:23 AM
Thank you so much dear poet Safa.
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