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Ocean lights cigarette Puffs mouthful smoke towards mountain Tobacco clouds incarcerate the mountain Later on.... Mountain coughs Its skins are uprooted Displaying crystal clear Cancer-laminated Black lungs of mountain Dear buddy I beg sorry I don't wanna be another mountain

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Date: 2/28/2016 8:13:00 AM
WELL SAID,, BIRAT.. LINDA
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Date: 1/5/2015 11:33:00 AM
You mean passive smoking...right it's a curse.We must read writing on the walls.Enjoyed your poem. welcome to PS.Love. Rajat
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Birat Anupam
Date: 1/6/2015 12:23:00 AM
Thank you so much dear poet Rajat.
Date: 1/5/2015 1:53:00 AM
Smoking high as there is fire! Nice poem -Safa
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Birat Anupam
Date: 1/6/2015 12:23:00 AM
Thank you so much dear poet Safa.

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