Smokey Night

It was a smokey night and it was breezey.
That smokey night there was a house that was smokey grey 
and the light where going on and off.
That night a man went in there to see what was going on, But that man never came 
out of the smokey old house that night.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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August 15, 2012 at 10:37 PM
Cindy, this has a sad ending... was the house on fire... just wondering.....:-) Thank you for sharing * Goodnight~ PD
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