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Another story about my first pet, first playmate and first friend.  My big black persian cat named Smokey. He will always live in my heart.

Smokey and the Teacher

I was six and in first grade,
When my teacher came to visit.
I hung around the house that day,
'Cause I didn't want to miss it.

Miss Henderson was very nice,
And her rule number one,
Was to get to know each pupil,
To know us one on one.

She followed Mom into the house,
Being polite and proper.
Mama set out tea and cakes,
And told me not to bother.


She wanted things to be just right,
To make a good impression.
She wanted to discuss with her,
My manners and my lessons.

Before she left my mom gave her,
A tour about the house.
They visited the garden,
Where Smokey caught a mouse.

He looked up and saw me,
And brought it straight to me.
He stood there with it in his mouth,
And eyed me carefully.

Then he dropped it at my feet.
It scurried fast away.
It ran across the teacher's foot,
She yelped and jumped away.

Smokey ran and got the mouse,
And brought it back alive.
"One more time." he seemed to say,
The teacher nearly died.

"He's brought it back! Oh sakes alive!
Lets go back in the house!"
"Don't be afraid' , I said to her,
'He's teaching me to mouse."

Mama laughed out loud at that,
The teacher was averse.
"Do they always play like that?"
"Oh no, sometimes it's worse."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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March 28, 2021 at 1:25 AM
Loads of fun and laughter - I chuckled all the way - this write is excellent. Thank-you Judy my friend for your support and kind words for Elias and his visit to hospital, It was a five hour operation with recovery 6 had to sign an indemnity form that if the operation went over twenty hours they were going to put him on a ventilator, a great thought to be told as you are going under anesthetic - He is a 100% now and drove on his 2nd day out of hospital . Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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March 28, 2021 at 1:29 PM
WoW! Jennifer it's great to hear he is well now. Super great. God is so good! Praise and thank Him for His goodness. Glad you liked this poem about my Smokey. God Bless, JB
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March 27, 2021 at 9:27 AM
It's the sometimes is worse that worries me. Great fun story. Hope you got high ratings in you exams.
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March 27, 2021 at 4:48 PM
Thanks bunches Victor. God Bless, JB
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March 27, 2021 at 8:24 AM
Hi Judy, You are a good storyteller. This is a great story about your childhood cat. I enjoyed it from start to finish. Well done:-) Alexis
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March 27, 2021 at 9:01 AM
Thanks bunches Alexis. God Bless, JB
Summers Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 8:36 PM
Reminds me of my cats Squeaker and Mephy, long gone now but still with me. Another great story and a great ending. John
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March 27, 2021 at 9:03 AM
Thanks so much John. God Bless, JB
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March 26, 2021 at 8:30 PM
Another fine story, well-written. Your cat was quite the playmate. I enjoyed this write a lot, Judy. Keep telling these stories and one day you'll have a chapbook of them.
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March 27, 2021 at 9:07 AM
I've got about 9 or 10 of them and they are a book I want to have published if only I knew how. Thanks bunches. God Bless, JB
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