Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

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Smokey

Smokey clouds stretch across the sun
A purple cast appears
An apricot color decorates
Silhouetted trees sear

A light show on the horizon
The sun seemed to reverse
Dark purple clouds wrap around
The roosters' song terse

Fog that filled the vale eight feet deep
Lifted without a sound
On the creek a honking bird
Sang a tune just one round

Only a tiny golden peek
From the now rising sun
Smokey gray and deep purple clouds
Dominate guess the sun's done

Out on the porch for a short while this morning..Sara

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Joe Maverick April 19, 2015 at 2:59 PM Enjoying the scenery here Sara, great work..'

Poet Destroyer A April 12, 2015 at 1:08 AM WOW, You have the best seat in the house when it comes to viewing nature. Thank you for sharing the amazing Morning Sara... Linda

David Mohn April 11, 2015 at 3:37 PM Terrific mood created Sara...much enjoyed

Nette Onclaud April 11, 2015 at 2:29 AM how invigorating, sara... i enjoyed this luscious scene.. beautiful!.. huggs

Andrea Dietrich April 10, 2015 at 11:37 PM you are so in tune with nature, Sara. I always seeing you post poems singing the praises of it! Nice one.

M. L. Kiser April 10, 2015 at 4:43 PM This is truly a beautiful word-painting. Inspiring and a joy to read.

Constance La France April 10, 2015 at 3:38 PM Sara, you have a gift for seeing the beauty you see in life and writing it to share in poetry, 7 and thanks for visiting my poetry

Dan Kearley April 10, 2015 at 2:43 PM Did you take that picture? Loved the poem, and the pic. :o)

Anne-Lise Andresen April 10, 2015 at 9:07 AM - Picture above unnecessary Sara, you have described it so beautifully - I wish you a wonderful weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ashley Light April 10, 2015 at 9:04 AM Very much enjoyed this poem! Great job! I could perfectly picture in my mind every aspect of a gorgeous sunrise that you wrote about. Well done! -Ashley :)