Smokey

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Smokey clouds stretch across the sun
A purple cast appears
An apricot color decorates
Silhouetted trees sear

A light show on the horizon
The sun seemed to reverse
Dark purple clouds wrap around
The roosters' song terse

Fog that filled the vale eight feet deep
Lifted without a sound
On the creek a honking bird
Sang a tune just one round

Only a tiny golden peek
From the now rising sun
Smokey gray and deep purple clouds
Dominate guess the sun's done

Out on the porch for a short while this morning..Sara

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 4/19/2015 2:59:00 PM
Enjoying the scenery here Sara, great work..'
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Date: 4/12/2015 1:08:00 AM
WOW, You have the best seat in the house when it comes to viewing nature. Thank you for sharing the amazing Morning Sara... Linda
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Date: 4/11/2015 3:37:00 PM
Terrific mood created Sara...much enjoyed
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Date: 4/11/2015 2:29:00 AM
how invigorating, sara... i enjoyed this luscious scene.. beautiful!.. huggs
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Date: 4/10/2015 11:37:00 PM
you are so in tune with nature, Sara. I always seeing you post poems singing the praises of it! Nice one.
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Date: 4/10/2015 4:43:00 PM
This is truly a beautiful word-painting. Inspiring and a joy to read.
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Date: 4/10/2015 3:38:00 PM
Sara, you have a gift for seeing the beauty you see in life and writing it to share in poetry, 7 and thanks for visiting my poetry
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Date: 4/10/2015 2:43:00 PM
Did you take that picture? Loved the poem, and the pic. :o)
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Date: 4/10/2015 9:07:00 AM
- Picture above unnecessary Sara, you have described it so beautifully - I wish you a wonderful weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/10/2015 9:04:00 AM
Very much enjoyed this poem! Great job! I could perfectly picture in my mind every aspect of a gorgeous sunrise that you wrote about. Well done! -Ashley :)
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