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Smoke Signals

high through jagged pines 
spiraling up towards the sky
smoke from our cabin
indicating the changing
fickle Indian summer
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
September 9, 2009 at 10:00 AM
Excellent writing Carrie. You are on a roll today. Love, Carol
Lopez Avatar
September 9, 2009 at 8:20 AM
what a beautiful image that you have painted with this write Carrie. Are there any wild fires still brewing in your areaof the state?
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September 9, 2009 at 8:11 AM
An amazingly vivid image, Carrie! Excellent write! Love, Carolyn
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