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Smoke Signals

tonight my breath trailing in this air rises amidst darkness like little smoke signals sending out an s.o.s. i look up towards starless skies wondering if you were able would you send one back

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/6/2019 10:54:00 AM

How cool that would be or use a Vuvuzela from where we are! Lovely cute poem Sandra! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/6/2019 11:30:00 AM

i think either or, both would be cool...i kind of think this thought may have come from my love for the american indians culture...i don't know... hugs

Running Wolves

Date: 12/6/2019 8:58:00 AM

Such beautiful sadness... Lingering unknowns... Wrapping...slowly... around ones heart... Like tenacious vines... Questions unanswered... never depart... Pleading with fate... In hope one waits...To hear a favorable answer...

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/6/2019 10:07:00 AM

Thank you Robert... what a beautiful comment :) hugs

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/6/2019 8:57:00 AM

Lovely imagery Sandra, and yes I would. Tom

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/6/2019 10:07:00 AM

Aww thank you Tom... what a fun way that would be to communicate, maybe make winter more bearable to connect with friends...or loved ones...or others... hugs

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/6/2019 7:32:00 AM

I feel I am there staring at the starless sky with you my friend.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/6/2019 10:05:00 AM

Thank you Caren... glad i could bring you along on the journey... hugs

Chris Green

Date: 12/6/2019 6:55:00 AM

Simply beautiful my friend. What visions gather in your mind...sigh. I just love the way you see things.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/6/2019 10:04:00 AM

Thank you so much Chris... wouldn't it be cool if we could just send smoke signals in the dark to anywhere...little messages and have them sent back....my muse is the one that comes up with these visions my friend... hugs

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 12/5/2019 11:36:00 PM

Yes... I'm sure he would. Love this. Always lovely to read you, God bless with love, Gina

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/6/2019 10:02:00 AM

Thank you so much Gina...my muse was stuck in night images last night...glad you enjoyed this one... hugs :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/5/2019 8:59:00 PM

So longingly, sweetly penned, Sandra. Perfectly pictured. Happy Thursday evening, Gershon

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/5/2019 9:02:00 PM

Thank you...something inspiring about that frigid air tonight at least... hugs Have a great evening my friend!

Hello There

Date: 12/5/2019 8:38:00 PM

Ah, quite nice! If the connection comes from a caring place, I think the answer would have to be yes! Loved this :) hugs

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/5/2019 8:50:00 PM

Thank you so much...i sat down to write a poem for a contest, nope my muse wasn't having it...we ended up with a few scribbles... hugs