Sandra Adams Poet Free verse

Smoke Signals

tonight
my breath
trailing
in this air
rises amidst darkness
like little smoke signals
sending out an s.o.s.
i look up
towards
starless skies
wondering
if you were able
would you 
send one
back

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Jennifer Proxenos December 6, 2019 at 10:54 AM How cool that would be or use a Vuvuzela from where we are! Lovely cute poem Sandra! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer Sandra Adams December 6, 2019 at 11:30 AM i think either or, both would be cool...i kind of think this thought may have come from my love for the american indians culture...i don't know... hugs

Running Wolves December 6, 2019 at 8:58 AM Such beautiful sadness... Lingering unknowns... Wrapping...slowly... around ones heart... Like tenacious vines... Questions unanswered... never depart... Pleading with fate... In hope one waits...To hear a favorable answer... Sandra Adams December 6, 2019 at 10:07 AM Thank you Robert... what a beautiful comment :) hugs

Tom Cunningham December 6, 2019 at 8:57 AM Lovely imagery Sandra, and yes I would. Tom Sandra Adams December 6, 2019 at 10:07 AM Aww thank you Tom... what a fun way that would be to communicate, maybe make winter more bearable to connect with friends...or loved ones...or others... hugs

Caren Krutsinger December 6, 2019 at 7:32 AM I feel I am there staring at the starless sky with you my friend. Sandra Adams December 6, 2019 at 10:05 AM Thank you Caren... glad i could bring you along on the journey... hugs

Chris Green December 6, 2019 at 6:55 AM Simply beautiful my friend. What visions gather in your mind...sigh. I just love the way you see things. Sandra Adams December 6, 2019 at 10:04 AM Thank you so much Chris... wouldn't it be cool if we could just send smoke signals in the dark to anywhere...little messages and have them sent back....my muse is the one that comes up with these visions my friend... hugs

Regina Mcintosh December 5, 2019 at 11:36 PM Yes... I'm sure he would. Love this. Always lovely to read you, God bless with love, Gina Sandra Adams December 6, 2019 at 10:02 AM Thank you so much Gina...my muse was stuck in night images last night...glad you enjoyed this one... hugs :)

Gershon Wolf December 5, 2019 at 8:59 PM So longingly, sweetly penned, Sandra. Perfectly pictured. Happy Thursday evening, Gershon Sandra Adams December 5, 2019 at 9:02 PM Thank you...something inspiring about that frigid air tonight at least... hugs Have a great evening my friend!

Hello There December 5, 2019 at 8:38 PM Ah, quite nice! If the connection comes from a caring place, I think the answer would have to be yes! Loved this :) hugs Sandra Adams December 5, 2019 at 8:50 PM Thank you so much...i sat down to write a poem for a contest, nope my muse wasn't having it...we ended up with a few scribbles... hugs