Aiyah Torres Poet Blank verse

Smoke Gets High

stone keeps rolling,

                                 smoke gets higher,

                     passing through his system.

                                   running mind wild and free.  

                                              changing one into zombie.

                                                 pulse beats faster.

                                  ants become monster.

                                      weak gets stronger.

                            world turns smaller.

                                           once you'd hook, 

                                                no ending.

                                               things are worsen,

                                    when smoke gets high.




   ** 6th Place Winner in PD's Contest: Any Poem #22 **

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Skat A April 30, 2014 at 9:13 PM AIYAH, this is a sweet win:) Congratulations, <3 always ~SKAT~ <3 Aiyah Torres May 1, 2014 at 7:11 AM Hi dear SKAT... Thanks sweetie for a lovely comment!! ..:O))

Andrea Dietrich April 26, 2014 at 7:11 PM wow, how did I ever miss this one. GREAT poetry. I enjoyed seeing this on the contest list. Congrats for your win. Aiyah Torres April 29, 2014 at 10:01 AM Hi Andie! Thanks a lot for always having a time to congratulate me and read my poems!!! You are so sweet and kind! .. :O))

Paul Callus April 26, 2014 at 8:13 AM Enjoyed the topic and the beat in this write. congrats on your win. :) // paul Aiyah Torres April 29, 2014 at 10:03 AM Thank you Paul... I appreciate your time visiting and leaving my poem a great reward!!! :O)))

Poet Destroyer A April 26, 2014 at 1:20 AM Hello Aiyah, , stopping by a second and third time, this time to congratulate you awesome win:) Thank you so much for bearing out my contest. If you like, -stop by my latest blog "LOVE" Enjoy the tiny tribute to all the winning poems. Here's the link, just in case you're one of the new poets. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=556582 ***Always & Forever*** -LINDA Aiyah Torres April 29, 2014 at 10:07 AM Linda... you're so sweet!! Thank you for the placement of my poem in your contest!!! :O))) It's a pleasure for me to join.I just can't join to ALL of your contest, b'cos the first day you post it, then just a blink of an eyes, the contest is already closed,haha. I wonder why?!... I think you just have a huge number of fans.. so next time I need to be hurry..go run and enter my poem!!! Thanks again!here's a hug :O)))

Ivor Kos April 26, 2014 at 12:38 AM I don't smoke but this poem is perfect. COngrats on your win on this konkors (contest). Mr. Callus is 4th with a terrific poem!! Aiyah Torres April 27, 2014 at 7:41 PM Thanks Ivo for a great compliment!!! ..I appreciate your visit and comment.... it's not just about normal piece of cigar.. It's something that Every man's would love but hate to "met".. :O))

Scott Thirtyseven April 11, 2014 at 7:29 AM Love the zombie line, and then he gets eating. You have given this poem a really good shape. Well done. Aiyah Torres April 11, 2014 at 8:11 AM Hey scott.. thank you for commenting, man!!! :O)) my pleasure to have your name on my poem!! ^_^