Smog

The atrocity of greed has never reached so high; The morality of man has never plunged so low. For who but greed-fueled man would commit such an act, forcing vanguards to poison what they were born to protect? Across the sea, the souls of trees weep; Into our lungs, the stink of death creep.

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Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/17/2013 7:13:00 PM

Wow, you have real talent. I will keep looking for your work. BG

Skat A

Date: 7/17/2013 3:52:00 PM

Hi Choo Sum Lee, very deep,, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT"

Choo Sum Lee
Date: 7/19/2013 6:45:00 AM

Thanks a lot, SKATOZ. It's really gratifying to find a little niche for amateur Malaysian poets out here. I have just started developing and interacting with this blossoming passion for poetry and literature, and would really value your opinions and advices in the future.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/17/2013 6:53:00 AM

- Hi Choo Sum - A well written poem. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem, hope there will be many more in the future. - Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)

Choo Sum Lee
Date: 7/19/2013 6:48:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words. I really just wanted to find a place where my poetry can be reviewed through other people's eyes. Be sure to leave opinions, advice or criticisms on my poems in the future!