Smitten With Mittens

glove - a covering for the hand having separate sections for each of the fingers and the thumb and often extending part way up the arm

mitten - a covering for the hand and wrist having a separate section for the thumb only

SMITTEN WITH MITTENS

Kittens are smitten with their mittens, while their mom uses white gloves.
Meowing, they’re lost…they’re dirty; mom’s clean as snowy doves,
except when they are used to find leftover dust, her special pair -
not that the naughty dinnerless kittens, with mittens, care.

Snowballs, mostly caked with dirt, sticks and stones, they roll
between their grubby-pawed mittens easy to pat with fingerless palms.
One of the pair, of course, got rolled and tossed - no food in his bowl.
He knows the fate that awaits, when mom drops her bombs.

Mom buys the four gloves. Now they’re fingers are separated.
They panic, with teeth, they chew and pull, then fill each one
with snow and use them to throw, but they’re cold and frustrated.
They meow for dinner, meow for mittens - naughty every single one.

Mom takes pity, warms each pair of hands, feeds them gold.
Their stomachs ache from so much grub…she loves them so.
After all, she really is most understanding and caring, all told.
She pulls out her master card, buys mittens - they play in the snow.

1/17/2023
Contest: Of what use are gloves to fingers
that only understand mittens Poetry Contest
Sponsor: John Lawless
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Ligon Avatar
January 19, 2023 at 10:36 AM
This reminds me of a continuation of the naughty kittens story where they had dirty mittens so they couldn't have pie. Yours seems to illustrate that comfort is in familiarity, and I like how your third stanza shows the extent of the kittens' inadaptability to something new. Was fun to read.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 19, 2023 at 7:57 PM
Thank you, Juliet! Yes, they weren’t happy to be wearing gloves :)
Daniel Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 8:22 PM
Quite a delightful fun poem, Kim:)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 19, 2023 at 7:56 PM
Thank you, Joe!
Andresen Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 10:15 AM
- A creative poem, Kim - I prefer gloves ... but, mittens for snowball rolling :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 12:40 PM
Can’t you just see those ball forming hands making snowballs! Thank you ~ hugs
Logan Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 9:20 AM
Your solution has mom doing the most practical thing of all. It works!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 9:29 AM
She really does love those rascals <3
Buhagiar Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 2:28 AM
Dear Kim, I loved this poem with gloves and mittens involved. Strange I never wear gloves, but Malta is not too cold, though we are in for some bad weather. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 9:30 AM
Stay safe, my friend! :)
Krutsinger Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 2:24 AM
This poem is delightful from side to side, top to bottom, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 9:30 AM
Thank you so much! A nice comment :)
DiMino Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 3:32 PM
I did have a black cat with white mittens. He was a character, sneaking up behind the old Tom, slapping his dangling tail and running quickly off. Anything with suggestion of kittens I adore. Now. are these children or kittens? Doesn't matter. Delightful. Great write!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 5:53 PM
Doesn’t matter, does it! You made me smile :) Thank you, Joe!
Tor Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 2:04 PM
Wonderfully written Kim love the story line. Best wishes for the contest...
Rodrigues Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 5:55 PM
Thank you, Mike!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 5:53 PM
Thank you, Mike!
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