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Smitten To the Core

Wandering hearts star-crossed Another silent night celestial pulse scarlet letter comet tarry Earth angels cry A stellar love longing sigh written in the moonlit sky Straying asteroidal attitude lonely tale ice particle trail Send out an SOS solar flare in search of a quasar pulmonary spark rescue Solo silhouette merging hopes dying Void sadness wormhole bore to the core Always took the beaten path worn passion time traveled empty space continuum before Falling firmament eyes tear trace gravity cratering Complete the short circuit thru the cosmic expanse lonely nebular phase No Saturn expectations no cellular rings Then a galactic petal touch spurs an emotional rosy gas-go from inert growth to accelerated movement within Twin kinetic atom connect again once eve stillness of feelings end And shooting star desires become so supernova smitten

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Date: 7/21/2018 6:26:00 PM
A very impressive romantic poem that lingers in the mind Freddie. Lovely! : )
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Date: 7/19/2018 4:51:00 PM
Wow Freddie this poem has an attraction that draws the attention, right into it deeply. Well done :) You come up with amazing lines, always.
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Date: 7/19/2018 2:34:00 PM
Hello Freddie this is a romantic poem. I enjoyed it. Have a nice day my friend.Peace, Love, Joy.
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