Smitten To the Core



Wandering hearts
star-crossed
Another silent night 
celestial pulse 
scarlet letter comet tarry
Earth angels cry
A stellar love longing
sigh written in the moonlit sky
Straying asteroidal attitude
lonely tale
ice particle trail
Send out an SOS solar flare
in search of a 
quasar pulmonary spark rescue
Solo silhouette
merging hopes dying
Void sadness
wormhole bore to the core
Always took the beaten path
worn passion time traveled 
empty space continuum before
Falling firmament eyes
tear trace gravity cratering
Complete the short circuit
thru the cosmic expanse 
lonely nebular phase
No Saturn expectations
no cellular rings
Then a galactic petal touch
spurs an emotional rosy gas-go
from inert growth 
to accelerated movement within 
Twin kinetic atom 
connect again
once eve stillness of feelings end
And shooting star desires
become so supernova smitten
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Marcum Wong Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 6:26 PM
A very impressive romantic poem that lingers in the mind Freddie. Lovely! : )
Sands Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 4:51 PM
Wow Freddie this poem has an attraction that draws the attention, right into it deeply. Well done :) You come up with amazing lines, always.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 2:34 PM
Hello Freddie this is a romantic poem. I enjoyed it. Have a nice day my friend.Peace, Love, Joy.
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