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Smitten By You

Trudging on a lonely road In somewhat desolated and dreary mode Stumbled upon someone ineffably enchanting And felt the desire to espouse her, augmenting. Ah! Her dulcet voice and ravishing charm That pierced my heart without harm. I told myself “Yes, I have different goals, peremptory But to estrange this girl is incendiary” Having a yak with her was indelible I asked “When could be our next date? Probable? She could’ve balked, as her schedule was awry But she replied “Thursday, dine or a movie?” The first haphazard kiss was something ethereal. Oh! Nidhi, my sweetheart, do u belong to Arcadia, for real? For the moments I spend with you render a catharsis, inexplicable Frankly, I doubt if I could requite you with something that capable. I don’t care about the insecurities or the tempests my love would suffer I’ll always be with you, Love you forever. Never could I find love commensurate to yours, for me And I know of nothing as beautiful as your smile for me. I’m acutely smitten by you Mind if I bought a Persian kitten for you?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/15/2016 11:39:00 PM
Aditya goteti, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 9/13/2016 4:02:00 PM
Aditya, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/10/2016 9:19:00 AM
Aditya, Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love
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