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Smitten

Smitten by his every move, his every breath, Moving towards me and I'm dumb struck, lost for words, I intend to do nothing about it, just enjoy him, Tempting me, seducing me, how desperately absurd, Tasting his deliciousness, with each inhale, Excitement, wondering if he feels it too, Nothing can stop me from being hopelessly SMITTENED by you.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 10/19/2024 10:37:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/23/2016 9:15:00 PM

Jody, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/2/2016 12:04:00 AM

JODY, pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF HAPPY 2016. ...... SKAT

Sheol Moribund

Date: 12/7/2011 2:25:00 PM

Hi Jody-Ann: great poem...he's a lucky guy. Thanks 4 reading and commenting on my poem. Peace!!!

Varville Scott

Date: 11/4/2011 7:46:00 PM

Very nice