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Smitten

Smitten by his every move, his every breath, Moving towards me and I'm dumb struck, lost for words, I intend to do nothing about it, just enjoy him, Tempting me, seducing me, how desperately absurd, Tasting his deliciousness, with each inhale, Excitement, wondering if he feels it too, Nothing can stop me from being hopelessly SMITTENED by you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/23/2016 9:15:00 PM
Jody, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/2/2016 12:04:00 AM
JODY, pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF HAPPY 2016. ...... SKAT
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Date: 12/7/2011 2:25:00 PM
Hi Jody-Ann: great poem...he's a lucky guy. Thanks 4 reading and commenting on my poem. Peace!!!
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Date: 11/4/2011 7:46:00 PM
Very nice
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