Smiling Love

In sweet tenderness sweeping inside echoes moans turn tides
the sun warmly whispers joy your a  pleasant delight 
touching softly amber with your finger rays runs deep

Wind caressing the brow speaks within gentle love chains pearl drops fall
looking into distant clouds heart murmurs beat faster skipping
silver to white puffy grey smoking sighs surrender sweetly 

Magic smiling gently in the blue Heaven's a golden signal beams
larks singing merrily an enchanting tune holds captivating the air
in a circle of light honey, it's softly held on the warm glow upon your face 
 

 (Unrhymed Tercet)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Bateman Avatar
September 20, 2015 at 2:14 PM
Liam Mate, Romantic here,of course, with quite exquisite and magnificence imagery. "Circle of Light Honey" -- perfect!! I agree with Nette about the "Mr. Romance" title. Outstanding my friend!! Cheers and Best, Gary
Andresen Avatar
September 20, 2015 at 2:09 PM
- So romantic .... a adorable poem, Liam - Hope your weekend has been fine :) - Hugs and smile :) // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
September 19, 2015 at 4:39 AM
effervescent in its tone and mood, mr. romance!.. huggs
Petersen Potter Avatar
September 18, 2015 at 6:19 PM
Hi Liam!Another very beautiful,romantic, magical,sweet, n' captivating love poem, you've penned here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling! So very beautifully written!Just awesome!Another very sparkling diamond from your very golden pen.I truly enjoy it!A most beautiful,romantic, dreamy,sweet enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.I love it!A true glowing golden gem!Just wonderful!Excellent!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + ++! A Fav! To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic,gentle and sweet.I'm so very happy to see you writing and posting again Liam.I really hope and pray with all my heart n' soul that you're okay in everything.Keep your Faith!Wishing you a very peaceful and lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
Nance Avatar
September 18, 2015 at 6:12 PM
aww... sweeeeet....
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