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Smiling At Strangers

Smiling at strangers, or saying hello passing the time, on my walks down the street with mixed responses, from those you don’t know some stare at their phones or else at their feet Joggers those nodders, take you in their stride focussed on fitness, or some sort of race barely acknowledge that you moved aside they'll choose to refuse a look at your face Pushy young parents, oh so self-aware they hurry by without hesitation gripping their pushchairs, as though they don’t care now I worry for new generations But those with their mutts, serial walkers No ifs or buts, they're serious talkers.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 9/19/2024 6:13:00 AM
When I walk I like to be greeted with eye contact, a smile or hello! Nice sonnet!
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Martin Challender
Date: 9/19/2024 6:57:00 AM
Much appreciated Karen. Glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: 9/19/2024 3:45:00 AM
This sonnet is very well done, and I agree, I'd rather see someone's eyes then their feet or cel phones dear poet, thank you for sharing, it was a pleasure reading your work.
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Martin Challender
Date: 9/19/2024 4:59:00 AM
Many thanks Rose. Appreciate the feedback :)

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