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Smiling At Strangers

Smiling at strangers, or saying hello
passing the time, on my walks down the street
with mixed responses, from those you don’t know
some stare at their phones or else at their feet

Joggers those nodders, take you in their stride
focussed on fitness, or some sort of race
barely acknowledge that you moved aside
they'll choose to refuse a look at your face

Pushy young parents, oh so self-aware
they hurry by without hesitation
gripping their pushchairs, as though they don’t care 
now I worry for new generations

But those with their mutts, serial walkers
No ifs or buts, they're serious talkers. 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 9/19/2024 6:13:00 AM
When I walk I like to be greeted with eye contact, a smile or hello! Nice sonnet!
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Martin Challender
Date: 9/19/2024 6:57:00 AM
Much appreciated Karen. Glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: 9/19/2024 3:45:00 AM
This sonnet is very well done, and I agree, I'd rather see someone's eyes then their feet or cel phones dear poet, thank you for sharing, it was a pleasure reading your work.
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Martin Challender
Date: 9/19/2024 4:59:00 AM
Many thanks Rose. Appreciate the feedback :)

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