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Smileys On Colorful Balloons

Smileys on colorful balloons give you a good laugh as summer days spent on sand dunes! Debbie, you celebrate your birthday today: never dislike or hate yourself for another wrinkle, instead listen to those sentimental tunes... someone will winkle! Smileys on colorful balloons will float around you as planets spin around the golden sun; don't reveal your real age to us as you step down... to give your beautiful crown to a younger one! A big hug and a unique present are especially for you, Debbie; my hug is warmer than sunshine, and red fermenting wine! I couldn't refrain from shouting out," " Happy Birthday, Debbie! " After the bash party has ended, lay down as your favorite star twinkles... make that wish by saying it aloud, " Magical cream, erase all my wrinkles! "

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/2/2012 1:43:00 PM
ANDREW, , Congratulations with your FUN LOVING POEM for Debbie's "It's MY Birthday " contest bash... had fun reading all her happy dandy winners. Always~ xox~ PD
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Date: 10/1/2012 9:49:00 PM
great poem, love the last line. WEll done Lee
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Date: 10/1/2012 3:43:00 PM
Very original and colorful. Hope she doesn't mind all the reference to wrinkles. hahaha. I really enjoyed your poem for Debs, Andrew.
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Date: 10/1/2012 7:13:00 AM
a colorful offering, andrew... super congrats on your win!..:) hugggs
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Date: 10/1/2012 6:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrew. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/30/2012 10:58:00 PM
Many congrats Andrew for this win.
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Date: 9/30/2012 10:54:00 PM
BIG CONGRATULATIONS ANDREW FOR WINNING 1ST PLACE ON DEBBIE’S CONTEST. HAVE A BLESSED DAY ALWAYS!! (^_^)
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Date: 9/30/2012 6:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem placing in this contest. We ought to do birthdays more often.
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Date: 9/30/2012 1:52:00 PM
Big congrats Andrew xx
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Date: 9/30/2012 12:35:00 PM
Thank you from the bottom of me heart.[Please do mail me some of that cream!!!] Light & Love
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Date: 9/20/2012 10:13:00 AM
A delightful poem Andrew. Have a nice afternoon. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/20/2012 3:08:00 AM
Beautiful dedication to Debbie.Best wishes.
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