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Smiles Prevail

eye lashes blink tickle your soft lips smiles prevail Haiku your way contest

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/1/2011 3:59:00 PM

Leave the MY off line 1 Mike..it's not needed, & the till in line 3! Then you'd have very good senyru! [ I've read outloud at many coffee houses, it's easy you don't have to memorize it and all poets are very nice they always clap! I'm sure you could do it. And if they didn't shoosh for you I"D SHOOSH um!] Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2011 10:14:00 PM

this one is pure delight, Michael. It shows very fun affection. Luv, Andrea

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/30/2011 8:41:00 AM

Mr. Romance? How did I miss this on? Lovely write once again, it's nice when the smiles triumph hey? love Wilma

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/29/2011 10:10:00 AM

Hi Michael-- I can always depend on you for the romantic writes-- :) reading this definitely put a smile on my face ^_^

Christine A Kysely

Date: 1/29/2011 9:58:00 AM

Interesting......Christine

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/29/2011 9:28:00 AM

You are a pure heart, romantic, and poet all in one! this is so tender! :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/28/2011 9:17:00 PM

a sweet gentle write, enjoyed this haiku Michael,..p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/28/2011 9:29:00 AM

Exceptional write Michael. Enjoyed reading. Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan

Date: 1/27/2011 9:04:00 PM

This is awsome Micheal. I love the image here, all the best.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/27/2011 6:48:00 PM

Very sensual and passionate pen picture, Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/27/2011 5:11:00 PM

So sweet and romantic Michael... so charming and special .. my White Knight.. hope u are safe in this mess they are calling snow.. I call is mess..haha.. Jersey Girl looking for warm sunny hot beach .. with luv..