Smiles Prevail

eye lashes blink

tickle your soft lips

 smiles prevail




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Guzzi Avatar
February 1, 2011 at 3:59 PM
Leave the MY off line 1 Mike..it's not needed, & the till in line 3! Then you'd have very good senyru! [ I've read outloud at many coffee houses, it's easy you don't have to memorize it and all poets are very nice they always clap! I'm sure you could do it. And if they didn't shoosh for you I"D SHOOSH um!] Light & Love
Dietrich Avatar
January 30, 2011 at 10:14 PM
this one is pure delight, Michael. It shows very fun affection. Luv, Andrea
Neels Avatar
January 30, 2011 at 8:41 AM
Mr. Romance? How did I miss this on? Lovely write once again, it's nice when the smiles triumph hey? love Wilma
K. Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 10:10 AM
Hi Michael-- I can always depend on you for the romantic writes-- :) reading this definitely put a smile on my face ^_^
Kysely Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 9:58 AM
Interesting......Christine
Richards Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 9:28 AM
You are a pure heart, romantic, and poet all in one! this is so tender! :)
A   Avatar
January 28, 2011 at 9:17 PM
a sweet gentle write, enjoyed this haiku Michael,..p.d.
Brown Avatar
January 28, 2011 at 9:29 AM
Exceptional write Michael. Enjoyed reading. Love, Carol
Mannan Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 9:04 PM
This is awsome Micheal. I love the image here, all the best.
Mehta Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 6:48 PM
Very sensual and passionate pen picture, Michael
Sweetheart Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 5:11 PM
So sweet and romantic Michael... so charming and special .. my White Knight.. hope u are safe in this mess they are calling snow.. I call is mess..haha.. Jersey Girl looking for warm sunny hot beach .. with luv..
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