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August 18, 2012

Poetry/Senryu x2 /smiles and frowns
Copyright Protected, ID 08-414-434-18
All Rights Reserved, 2012, Constance La France

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Smiles and Frowns



my cat purring soft
on my lap as I watch TV -
               and my heart just smiles

tending my garden
on a sunny summer day - 
            and rain brings a frown
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Morris Avatar
July 6, 2024 at 9:17 AM
Lovely poem. Cats are healing. Enjoy the love.
Inman Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 9:59 AM
Simple, sweet and to the point, very nice.
Dietrich Avatar
August 18, 2012 at 11:01 AM
Very well done for the contest. For me that first one is utter bliss!! (did you know I had to get rid of my cats recently, Constance? It broke my heart)
Sivey Avatar
August 18, 2012 at 10:21 AM
This is a brilliantly crafted write my friend! I truly enjoyed the dynamic at which you created this incredible poem! Your talent is astounding Constance! Great Work!!
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