Smiles and Frowns

. Him His voice His soft touch Tender kisses Every time that he walks in the door Every time that he walks out the door Unanswered calls Postponed dates His lies Him Chiquita(Chiamaka)Baity Contest Name "Smiles and Frowns

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Babatunde T Ogunsiku

Date: 7/19/2011 11:09:00 AM

Nice

Edward Orozco

Date: 7/18/2011 10:10:00 PM

=) good writteee- edward

Joseph Osita

Date: 7/18/2011 8:15:00 AM

That's a well penned tetractyl.Truely amazing.thanks for sharing

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/18/2011 5:47:00 AM

What a blessing we have in PoetrySoup. A place to come to write and read and make new friends along the ink trail. I am wishing you a day full of inspiration. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope to read many more written by you in the future Chiquita. Love, Carol

Jodie Williams

Date: 7/18/2011 2:44:00 AM

great entry!! good luck!