Smiles

What beautiful flower I beheld The fragrance of heaven that I smell The smiles that kept me in the morning air And, the hands that fed me Your smiles that we will miss Your comfort, please don’t keep To the other side that you have roamed Keep us safe till we met again.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 11/10/2024 10:45:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/10/2016 12:21:00 AM

a darling poem, Joanna. the imagery is heartfelt.. LINDA

Joanna Charlery
Date: 4/12/2016 8:04:00 PM

Thank you Linda! Your feedback has given me the inspiration to continue this journey.