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Smiles

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          they                                                                          you
                say when your smiling       whole world smiles with
    ~  when                                the                                              ~
                 your                                                        point at you 
                        laughing                                   point at you
                                       two or      clowns  smile
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Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 4/16/2011 8:54:00 AM had to come back here Mitch for another dose of that big, happy smile ^_^-- I remember this very creative write, love it as much as I did a year ago-- wow a year has passed? Smiles your way again, thank you for the sweet comments! ^_^ Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 5/25/2010 10:57:00 PM 3 mins?? oh wow! you are a speed writing demon, Mitch! I tried thinking of writing a concrete for this contest & came up with nothing! btw this smile of yours complements my blissful grins really well too ;) Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 5/25/2010 8:36:00 PM very nice concrete, Mitch :) must've taken a lot of patience to pull this off, but I think it paid off, you sure are getting a lot of smiles for it :) & here's another one ^_^ Login to Reply

Date: 5/24/2010 1:43:00 PM You had me smiling the first time I read this and again today. Congratulations on your win in Amy's contest. Keep that creativity coming! Wishing you ongoing success. Karen Login to Reply

Amy Green Date: 5/24/2010 12:51:00 PM This one had me cracking up! Congrats on your win! Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 5/24/2010 12:47:00 PM How perfect Mitch ..to win with your signature signoff.. congrats on a winning design and words to match... u enjoy those sweet smiles u send everyone ...now sending a big "Sweetheart" smile back at u....luv.. Login to Reply

Brian Strand Date: 5/19/2010 12:45:00 AM Brilliant work a picture indeed.Rgds Brian & Thank you for your kind words. Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 5/14/2010 2:16:00 PM Im in love with these smiles Mitch,,very creative..Charma..Im smiling..;) Login to Reply

Jay Loveless Date: 5/14/2010 11:38:00 AM (: i like this one alot nice job. and nice lips lol ~rainbow Login to Reply

Kim M Date: 5/14/2010 6:49:00 AM Clever and cute, Mitch! Your smile made me smile! (FYI: I will be going back to work with very little time to devote to Poetry Soup. During my vacation, I have enjoyed reading your poetry, and I will keep checking every once in a while, as time permits. Please notify me when you get the Rhymin Simon song posted on U-Tube.) Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/13/2010 8:28:00 PM I am smiling at you Mitch, hope you are smiling two or three. Love the laughing line. I also enjoyed the space ship you,,i,,i,,mean smile you got their. Just pulling your leg about the spce ship. I know it is smile, hope you are doing alright. Have yourself a good one,..p.d. Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 5/12/2010 6:44:00 PM COOL WRITE, ENJOYED Login to Reply

Date: 5/12/2010 1:28:00 PM You certainly have me smiling. Enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing. Karen Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 5/12/2010 12:38:00 PM Very cool Mitch .. good luck in Amy's new contest... this is different and original...glad u enjoyed my Two Too Square... luv..from the "Sweetheart" Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 5/12/2010 10:40:00 AM Very cute, Mitch. Nice job with the form, too. My mom used to say, "Laugh and the world laughs with you, but cry and you cry alone." Thanks for sending in the clowns and giving us a smile! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply