Smile

a smile given  travels like a boomerang - then returns to you
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What goes around comes around
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Williams Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 3:06 AM
I understand that so well coming from the land of the Boomerang Joseph, what goes around comes around, so clever. Great monoku I can see why it took top place. Congratulations...Maria
Downing  Avatar
January 9, 2018 at 8:08 PM
Congrats Joseph on your win! It sure did make me smile back :) hugs and smiles :)
Roper Avatar
January 9, 2018 at 6:42 PM
Well done, Joseph. Congratulations on your 1 liner poem . Hugs Eve ~`*
Dietrich Avatar
January 8, 2018 at 6:16 PM
Oh this is so nice, you did the opposite way of how most people interpret that saying. A positive take on it!!
Sands Avatar
January 8, 2018 at 5:36 AM
This is so perfect and I hadn't seen it before Joseph. Congratulations! :)
Gupta Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 9:28 AM
Congratulations on your first place ...
Mohn Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 6:02 PM
Congrats Joseph...nicely written!
Andresen Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 1:30 PM
- Congratulations Joseph, on your great first place in the contest - Lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 12:15 PM
A wonderful example of karma Joseph! Congratulations on your top wIn! : )
Gauthier Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 11:16 AM
Charmin monoku. Congrats on your win, Joseph.
George   Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 10:45 AM
Congratulations, Joseph. Great Monoku. Sincerely, Elaine
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 9:30 AM
Glad to see this one in the winner's circle :) smiles galore! Congratulations!
One Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 9:07 AM
Simple, but true and to the point Joseph.. Congratulations on your first place in the cliche monoku contest..
Gupta Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 9:10 AM
Nice coming around in the Monoku ... Sure to secure a nice placement ...
Pandit Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 7:38 AM
A lovely thought..well written, Joseph.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 8:33 PM
Nice! Smiles to you! :)
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