Smile

Clouds roaming around Between two short spells some rest Blue sky like your smile _______________________________________ July 2, 2017

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 7/9/2017 1:13:00 PM

You painted a very pretty picture w/words, Probir. First class poetry is the norm for you. Excellent haiku. Love always.

Probir Gupta
Date: 7/11/2017 1:09:00 AM

Thank you, Freddie ...

Eiza Evangelista

Date: 7/2/2017 10:31:00 PM

nice haiku, this reminds me of a friend he always says my smile is like a blue sky so bright and nice to look at hehhehe (i know he is just joking around hah!)

Probir Gupta
Date: 7/2/2017 11:47:00 PM

Thank you ... May be also that he is not joking ... In some smiles sky does emerge ...

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/2/2017 2:03:00 PM

Great haiku, Probir:) I'm smiling:)

Probir Gupta
Date: 7/2/2017 11:48:00 PM

Glad that a little poem makes you smile ... Thank you ...

White Wolf

Date: 7/2/2017 2:07:00 AM

A lovely haiku, Probir! Nicely done mate

Probir Gupta
Date: 7/2/2017 6:19:00 AM

Thank you ...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/2/2017 1:58:00 AM

Heavenly my friend, Probir. Where have you been? Good you are back with...a smile!

Probir Gupta
Date: 7/2/2017 6:19:00 AM

Thank you ...