Smile

Clouds roaming around
Between two short spells some rest
Blue sky like your smile
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July 2, 2017
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Robinson Jr. Avatar
July 9, 2017 at 1:13 PM
You painted a very pretty picture w/words, Probir. First class poetry is the norm for you. Excellent haiku. Love always.
Gupta Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 1:09 AM
Thank you, Freddie ...
Evangelista Avatar
July 2, 2017 at 10:31 PM
nice haiku, this reminds me of a friend he always says my smile is like a blue sky so bright and nice to look at hehhehe (i know he is just joking around hah!)
Gupta Avatar
July 2, 2017 at 11:47 PM
Thank you ... May be also that he is not joking ... In some smiles sky does emerge ...
Turner Avatar
July 2, 2017 at 2:03 PM
Great haiku, Probir:) I'm smiling:)
Gupta Avatar
July 2, 2017 at 11:48 PM
Glad that a little poem makes you smile ... Thank you ...
Wolf Avatar
July 2, 2017 at 2:07 AM
A lovely haiku, Probir! Nicely done mate
Gupta Avatar
July 2, 2017 at 6:19 AM
Thank you ...
Trifiatis Avatar
July 2, 2017 at 1:58 AM
Heavenly my friend, Probir. Where have you been? Good you are back with...a smile!
Gupta Avatar
July 2, 2017 at 6:19 AM
Thank you ...
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