November 9, 2023
Contest : Tetractys
Sponsored by : Ink Empress
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Sky adorns sunburst dawn, jade glades glitter. Sublime show surges with sleek flow of brook, cascades designed charm down the verdant vale, like my longing, spurts for you, stream of joy. Smile spreads silk sunrise shine on your flushed face, rears rare rhythm of rhapsody in my heart.
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