Smells So Sweet

Smells So Sweet

A fragrance in the Air stops me where i stand a moment of perfection
Smells so Sweet
Taste buds water,Heartbeats faster breathing deeper to obtain more,
Smells so sweet.
Perfumed happiness,Positive thoughts,Forgotten stress,Relaxed frame of mind,
Smells so Sweet.
Totally lost subdued by smell ......Someone has taste...mmmmm
Smell So Sweet

Damian L Hunt
2004
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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September 8, 2026 at 7:34 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
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