SMELL THE WATER AND TELL ME I WON'T DROWN

It smells like sprinklers 
 hot pavement
And dirt
 the sky is six different colors
And the cicadas sing at six different octaves
 my face is red
Hair wet with sweat
From chasing the cat
Around the yard
Barefoot in the grass
That morning momma had made chocolate chip pancakes
With butter and honey
She braided my sisters hair while I sang “blank space” 
By taylor swift
Screaming over the speaker which played wide and loud
And the squirrel stole the seeds from the birdfeeder
And the night before 
Daddy read us one bedtime story
Even thought my sister had begged for two
We sat sulking in our princess dresses
That smelled like old toys
And home
Daddy closed the book
And turned on the galaxy light as he walked out
Made sure the door was ajar
To let the light in
And let the cat in
And four years before that I was new
And red
And I smelled like baby powder
Hospitals
Blood
And 
Life
My skin was soft
and i screamed
Momma didn’t wear makeup
or cry quite as much 
My sister just learned to walk
and she held me with shaking hands
And just then
Everything sounded like music
and summer never ended
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Agustin Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 5:01 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Pursley Avatar
November 18, 2025 at 5:51 PM
thank you so much for the compliment, but i have a really hard time with religion and traumatic experiences surrounding religious settings so please don't comment anymore bible verses here. thank you have a wonderful day.
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