Smell That Aroma

smell that aroma
fresh cut cedar in the house...
santa will come soon


*Christmas
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
November 15, 2010 at 9:32 AM
Congratulations on your win Jimmy in Deborah's contest Holiday Haiku. Love, Carol
Roberts Avatar
November 15, 2010 at 7:58 AM
love the smell of cedar, congrats on your win Jimmy
Freeman Avatar
November 14, 2010 at 5:55 PM
Congratulations Jimmy on your worthy poem's place. Agape, Moses
Dietrich Avatar
November 12, 2010 at 4:40 PM
VEry cute one, Jimmy. Congratulations!
Gorelick Avatar
November 12, 2010 at 4:31 PM
i can smell it! Good work and congrats. BG
Guzzi Avatar
November 12, 2010 at 1:40 PM
The only thing "that" kept you out of 2nd place was the word "that" (make a note D.G does not like THAT ;) I absolutely loved the scents nothing like the "smell" of Christmas & you too did not say Christmas HUZZAH! Good win! Light & Love (You should be very proud this is a HARD form!)
Haick Avatar
November 12, 2010 at 11:19 AM
A wonderful 3rd Place Win in Deb's contest, Jam! Congratulations on a fabulous Haiku! Very nice aroma from "fresh cut cedar"! Love it! Goes to my favs. Love, Audrey
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November 12, 2010 at 9:40 AM
What a great Christmas haiku, Jimmy! Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
November 12, 2010 at 9:20 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, JImmy
Sweetheart Avatar
November 12, 2010 at 8:08 AM
Super congrats Jimmy my friend on your big win in the Haiku contest with this charming piece on Christmas luv.. enjoy your victory today with luv..
Mehta Avatar
November 2, 2010 at 1:52 PM
Nice pen picture with good images looking very live, Jimmy
Haick Avatar
November 2, 2010 at 10:39 AM
Beautiful Haiku, Jam...soon.. very soon, you will enjoy this visually too. Goes to my favs. today. Take care. Love, Audrey
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