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There was a witch named Mary Fitch that had an awful itch to ditch her old phone for the latest smartphone. The sales person had given her a pitch to switch it did not matter which. She had twitched flinched at getting a loan, but she wanted to make the phone her own. She was not rich, hated to spend a lot of money; it had not been funny if there had been a glitch in the phone which would not have been, yet she understood. She had been bewitched, broke the itch, ditched switched. She wasn't rich, but she felt rich with her new smartphone that was her very own. 10/14/2019

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Date: 10/14/2019 8:44:00 AM
Oh!...excellent entry Eve...sure to satisfy Nina,s itch lol...sure to win...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 10/14/2019 3:06:00 AM
Excellent poem Eve! Creative and well written. I see your comment below about hitting your head. I am so sorry to hear that. I know what having concussions is like. I hope you will be ok :)
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Date: 10/14/2019 12:46:00 AM
I love my iPhone even thought it cost too much. This is a wonderful entry. All my best to you, dear... Blessings from heaven, Gina
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Date: 10/14/2019 12:59:00 AM
I just ditched my old flip-phone for a smartphone and I am lost. I fell two weeks ago and hit my head and I think I injured my tailbone on my kitchen ceramic tile and I couldn't function to work the stupid thing. I thank God I didn't pass-out just saw stars with a big softball size bump.

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