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SMART MAN

Who can tip over the water jars of the heavens
when the dust becomes hard
and the clods of the earth stick together?

Job 38:37b-38 NIV

SMART MAN

Smart man, God gave
you hands - to fill a water jug,
to sprinkle the garden.

Who has bought powdered water,
wrung out the rain from a cloud,
picked the dewdrops, like petals
from the sky? Smart man, who?!

Smart man, who turns to dust
after one hundred years,
who waters your grave, after
the mourners walk away?

How heavy, the water jars
of heaven? The angels huge
with wings, kick them over
at God’s command, not man’s.

Are we just clods, that stick
together. We are set to flight
only at the Lord’s command,
indefensible. Our tongues

cannot stick out to catch
a rain that does not exist.
Resist the Lord, smart man?
Is he not a friend? Is he not
the living water, the living end?

6/21/2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 6/23/2022 8:19:00 AM
Wow! What a powerful narration of God’s blessings and power! Enjoyed from start to finish
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Date: 6/23/2022 12:03:00 AM
Wow what a great way to tell it. I sure enjoyed this one
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/23/2022 6:05:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 6/22/2022 2:24:00 PM
What a wonderful write my friend. We have much to be thankful for. have a great day.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/23/2022 6:06:00 AM
Yes we do. Thank you, David!
Date: 6/21/2022 5:11:00 PM
This is truly a joy and a delight, Kim. FAVE for me, for sure! Thanks, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/22/2022 5:00:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon! Job indeed has great content! Be blessed!
Date: 6/21/2022 1:27:00 PM
Yes, your beautiful poem is a needed reminder of how helpless mankind really is without God. Excellent verse, Kim! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/21/2022 2:20:00 PM
Thank you, Laura!
Date: 6/21/2022 11:09:00 AM
We as humans can only exclaim in wonderment: You are the Lord and wondrous are your works! An outstanding writing, my friend, Kim. MaybHe keep blessings you and your work!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/21/2022 2:21:00 PM
Thank you so much, Demetrios! You inspire me too! God bless you!
Date: 6/21/2022 10:43:00 AM
He is indeed the be all and end all, he has the final say on everything. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/21/2022 11:03:00 AM
Thanks so much, Tom, for reading this, commenting and for your faith! God bless!
Date: 6/21/2022 9:06:00 AM
The Book of Job has a lesson to teach. I admit I read only parts of it. Yet you did a good job of this poem. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/21/2022 9:25:00 AM
Thank you, Victor! I think when you study it, you get over your fear of it. It is a great book.
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