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Smart Birds

flocks of geese flying remind of the life cycle survival of the fittest arrowheads pointing southward in a migration birds wiser than we, you see.
written October 11, 2021

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Date: 10/15/2021 11:46:00 AM
"arrowheads pointing" - this describes it perfectly!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/15/2021 12:36:00 PM
Yep, pretty much does when you look at them up there.
Date: 10/11/2021 4:57:00 PM
At least the birds know to follow their better instincts...
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/11/2021 5:48:00 PM
That is so true. But, in many cases, my end only stinks! Sorry, couldn't resist a Wolfism here.
Date: 10/11/2021 3:22:00 PM
This is a really cute succinct little verse, Milt. I enjoyed seeing this today.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/11/2021 5:48:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I hope it fits the bill.

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