Smart Birds

flocks of geese flying remind of the life cycle survival of the fittest arrowheads pointing southward in a migration birds wiser than we, you see.
written October 11, 2021
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Krutsinger Avatar
October 15, 2021 at 11:46 AM
"arrowheads pointing" - this describes it perfectly!
Hankins Avatar
October 15, 2021 at 12:36 PM
Yep, pretty much does when you look at them up there.
Wolf Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 4:57 PM
At least the birds know to follow their better instincts...
Hankins Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 5:48 PM
That is so true. But, in many cases, my end only stinks! Sorry, couldn't resist a Wolfism here.
Dietrich Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 3:22 PM
This is a really cute succinct little verse, Milt. I enjoyed seeing this today.
Hankins Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 5:48 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I hope it fits the bill.
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