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Small-Minded


Her smug smile smacked of smarminess,
Smouldering with self-smiting spite,
Her smartness smothered by smooth smirks
Was smashed to smoky smithereens.


12/03/17

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Eve Roper

January 4, 2018 at 11:08 PM

Nicely done, Jo, hugs Eve

Harry Horsman

January 4, 2018 at 9:35 AM

Wonderful Alliteration, Jo Happy New Year.

Vijay Pandit

January 3, 2018 at 10:27 AM

I am happy to read your poetry--very well written, Jo!

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 30, 2017 at 2:04 PM

- Dear Jo :) - My best wishes for a peacefull and lovely new year, and I thank you for your friendship through the year 2017 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Horn

December 28, 2017 at 4:00 PM

Poems Not Fade Away Am blinded by bright light God made, In His son, so I will sit in the shade; And pray, Without delay; My poems away won't let them fade. Jim Horn

Demetrios Trifiatis

December 26, 2017 at 5:21 AM

Smashing, little sister!

James Inman

December 24, 2017 at 3:02 AM

Smooooth write Jo. It would be interesting to know the story behind it.

Connie Marcum Wong

December 23, 2017 at 3:24 PM

You must be as busy as I am Jo. I hope you have a beautiful Christmas and a wonderful New Year my friend. xxoo : )

CayCay Godwin

December 19, 2017 at 7:44 AM

Wow to 'smarminess' - long time no hear or see 'smarminess', what a great word to pull out, Jo. Each line is a readers 's' party, wonderful job! All the best ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich

December 16, 2017 at 8:21 PM

Hey no win on this one? Back to admire it!

Janice Canerdy

December 16, 2017 at 9:51 AM

Great alliterative poem describing a truly ugly-spirited person! Janice

Pipping Stars

December 11, 2017 at 7:38 AM

cool s wordings ... this piece gave me an s word ... smile ... fin I may ... superbly sequestered ... ha ha ... that last s word just popped in my head don't even know what it means ... ha ha ... that's a bonus for me ... be really cool if it jives with your write ... ain't been all that inspired as of late ... this one is great ...

Sandra Haight

December 9, 2017 at 3:43 PM

Nicely done, Jo. Congrats on your win! Hugs, Sandra

Heidi Sands

December 9, 2017 at 10:56 AM

Congratulations Jo ! :)

Eve Roper

December 8, 2017 at 7:41 PM

Oh, I like the message for this write, Jo, congratulations on your win!

Jan Allison

December 8, 2017 at 4:53 PM

I really loved this one Jo!:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud

December 8, 2017 at 4:17 PM

ohh, well expressed with great use of alliterartion... nd so it is, jo... huggs

Patricia Cresswell

December 7, 2017 at 9:59 AM

WoW! I love the energy in this piece. Well written.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

December 6, 2017 at 8:56 AM

I love alliteration and this is awesomely crafted.. Could relate a bit to it. Kudos. Soo nice to read from u again, hope u will my latest too.

Andrea Dietrich

December 4, 2017 at 3:37 PM

Oh, Jo, this one can do double duty as alliteration AND you could put People after it and enter it in the People contest! Good job. I really dislike this type of person.