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Small Things, Great Joy

I stare at your body Without any embellishments You are so pretty! Anything placed on your skin Might diminish your beauty You are bewitching when nude! I move my hands over your slender neck Trace them over your voluptuous body You are so irresistible! I pick some fresh flowers Place them on your head Then I sit and stare at you! Exhilaration fills me from within I love you, my new flower vase I have been wanting one since long! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 23.05.2021 1st place Brain Strand contest

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Date: 5/24/2021 4:29:00 AM

An incredible and captivating personification in which, after you read it, you get transported to the entire world of romance with kisses and caresses, which also stimulates the persona. Nevertheless, the ending was something that I didn't anticipate.:) How fortunate for that vase, with the lovely neck and skin spots!