Debra Squyres Poet Rhyme

Small Space

Small Space

Space is tight in the small garden
Planted on the small terrace
Along the side careless
Climbing beans
Easily grow

Space is limited in sections small
Plants in pots along the rail
Alternating seating well
Carrots seeded
Earthen stow

Space is reduced for entertaining
Partial am I to fresh produce
Alterations seem obtuse
Cuisine freshness
Efforts show  


Written for Members Contest : Space on 2/27/13

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Roy Jerden March 25, 2013 at 5:29 PM What an excellent Shape poem, Debra!

Twanna Irisha March 12, 2013 at 8:22 PM Very nice. :)

Elizabeth Wesley March 9, 2013 at 8:44 PM Lots of crunch in this Debra; maybe you love veggies as much as I do. I think it's a great entry for the contest and wish you much luck! Lizzie

Susan Palli March 7, 2013 at 10:11 AM Excellent write!

David Williams March 7, 2013 at 3:10 AM Debra a good take on the theme, good luck...David

Andrea Dietrich March 6, 2013 at 2:49 PM hmmm, no congrats here. What? Let me go check the list and see if you got on!! (sorry if you didn't because I really liked it)

Poet Destroyer A March 6, 2013 at 2:13 PM Love your poem Debra, stopping by real quick, I like the way the title to your poem drew me in.. he he he,,,i like the space you gave a chefs garden bed... :-) well I better head off and post my any poem goes contest winners.. thank you for the nice comment,,, always~ LINDA

Heather Ober March 6, 2013 at 1:35 PM This is really wonderful, Debra! I love the poem itself, but the format is also really cool. Well done! :)

Daver Austin March 6, 2013 at 12:47 PM Love this one. We had a patio in a town house. Tried to grow veggies, but only made a lair for a bird catching cat. Thanks for reading my stuff. Love, daver

Jack Horne March 6, 2013 at 9:42 AM love this clever one - a sure winner - congrats on alll your wins : )

Jeremy Martin March 5, 2013 at 11:39 PM I like how you explore physical space in your poem and it is also accentuated by the actual physical shape of the words themselves.

Richard Lamoureux March 2, 2013 at 10:47 PM Both visually and emotionally pleasing.

Sara Kendrick March 2, 2013 at 9:49 AM Reads like a winner and a great salad and gourmet meals..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Scott Howard Myers The Gypsy King March 1, 2013 at 7:07 PM Yeah....very cool

Lucilla Carrillo March 1, 2013 at 3:23 PM Nice garden, it sounds like you live in Chicago or New York. Good luck in the contest. Lucilla

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl February 28, 2013 at 7:45 AM What a lovely use of space and a nice tower of pots with your arrangement of words; plenty of room to plant more love it xx

Ale A A February 27, 2013 at 9:41 PM I want to spend time in that space you just described. I think of beautiful, quiet space. Very nice.

Andrea Dietrich February 27, 2013 at 5:06 PM wow, I love the way this looks when formatted. It's so cool and a very unique way to do the Space contest. Love it.

Robert Johnson February 27, 2013 at 3:33 PM An awsome arrangment of planted words.

Russell Sivey February 27, 2013 at 3:12 PM I like what you have done with this incredible write my friend! I loved reading this delightful garden inspired poem this afternoon! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!

Constance La France February 27, 2013 at 1:40 PM Debra, what a delightful poem for the contest, I just love it and wish you the best of luck, constance