Slump

Slump

(Shakesperean sonnet in Iambic Pentameter)

Sobs, muted sobs, night's harvest of remorse,
spread from the core and dribble through the eyes,
in search of solace on this woeful course,
of bygone suns that shall no longer rise.

Cries, muffled cries, those nightmares of despair,
rise from the pits to choke a gloomy soul,
and waken corpses from commitments’ lair,
where pledges gather dust in a black hole.

Yet this numb, downcast, and lethargic mood,
returns with vengeance early every morn,
like pleasant warmth of summer lassitude,
no matter the night’s ridicule and scorn.

Regret piles up, like mail we never read,	
To foster apathy and sorrow breed

Placed 4th

10.15.2022

Submitted to "A Brian Strand Premiere Contest"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Alex Avatar
October 17, 2022 at 8:05 PM
"like mail we never read" - Beautiful simile. Whole sonnet is beautifully written. Congratulations!
Kibble Avatar
October 17, 2022 at 10:25 PM
Thank you for stopping by and commenting
Kendrick Avatar
October 17, 2022 at 7:52 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. I hope just a work and not a real case of depression. Way to go. Sara
Kibble Avatar
October 17, 2022 at 4:51 PM
Thank you Sara - I am well but who can really say. Take care.
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