Slug-Free

Yellow fire hazards blemish the lawn,
prickly to bare summer feet.
Locusts overtake the heat.
Aphids feast and continue to spawn,
yet still remain strawberries to eat.

7-8-2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Wolf Avatar
July 13, 2021 at 5:38 PM
A strawberry delight of a write, Juliet. Nice!! ~ Gershon
Faulkner Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 1:28 PM
Yes, strawberries (and watermelon) are my go to fruits in summer, very evocative imagery here too!
Alex Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 8:25 PM
Very beautiful.
Mcintosh Avatar
July 8, 2021 at 5:06 PM
love strawberries and most berries... blueberries especially... red raspberries. Enjoyed your creation here. God bless you always, Love, Gina
Ligon Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 7:05 PM
We've got them all in our yard. Such a blessing! Thanks for stopping by.
Leffanta Avatar
July 8, 2021 at 11:25 AM
there must be an absence of birds and/or mice/rats in your area as they love to eat strawberries . . ...
Ligon Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 7:05 PM
We've got lots of birds in our area, but we also have a ginger cat who is both a lover and a fighter.
Allison Avatar
July 8, 2021 at 11:25 AM
Ohh the slugs and snails decimate some of my plants but I dont have too many issues with aphids as marigold flowers tend to keep them at bay. I have netted the strawberries so the birds dont peck at them. hugs Jan xx
Ligon Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 7:03 PM
Slugs and snails are a big problem for us, but surprisingly they seem to like our horseradish leaves more than the strawberries.
Kauffman Avatar
July 8, 2021 at 11:21 AM
A true picture of the reality of the season filled with bright summer images, Juliet! For all of the pests, we still have sweet strawberries! A friend used to call a herd of snails escargot on the hoof! I buy ladybugs to take care of the aphids. Many years they just show up for their aphid feast!
Ligon Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 7:02 PM
We've got ladybugs too, but they're probably outnumbered. Slugs and snails are prolific in our yard, but I think the coffee grounds helped (as well as the dry weather.)
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