Sludge

Thick sludge upon my
wings; sad eyes in need of help
Hopeless eyes searching

For Raul's contest
(Photo of an oil coated duck and beach)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mcgovern Avatar
June 2, 2010 at 12:13 PM
Only the beginning. Again man makes nature suffer the result of his greed. Need to send this to BP.
Dietrich Avatar
May 20, 2010 at 8:25 PM
You did a great haiku. Congrats in the winners circle. Luv, andrea
A  Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 4:24 AM
PERFECT, LUCK IN THE CONTEST,,IRMA
Brown Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 12:24 PM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's "Tainted Feathers" contest Doris. Love, Carol
Knop Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 4:43 AM
Congratulation Doris on your win with this impressive Haiku!...Gert
Fraser Avatar
May 16, 2010 at 6:20 AM
Doris, many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest >> James
Freeman Avatar
May 14, 2010 at 8:55 PM
Congratulations on your success in Raul's contest Doris. Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
May 14, 2010 at 1:12 PM
Congrats Doris on your winning poem in Raul's contest .. an amazing win for an equally amazing write... luv.. Linda-Marie
Keys Avatar
May 14, 2010 at 10:25 AM
very enjoyable, relevant. thank you, chuck
Moreno Avatar
May 14, 2010 at 12:15 AM
Doris, congratulations on your placement in my Tainted Feathers contest...Raul
A   Avatar
May 13, 2010 at 8:51 PM
well done Doris, have a nice one, and the best of luck in the contest,..p.d.
Haick Avatar
May 13, 2010 at 3:28 PM
Perfect imagery in your Haiku. Good luck in the contest!..Peace, Audrey
Kendrick Avatar
May 13, 2010 at 3:12 PM
Great interpertative write about the picture that should do well in the contest...Keep the creative pen flowing...Mom
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