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Sludge

Thick sludge upon my wings; sad eyes in need of help Hopeless eyes searching For Raul's contest (Photo of an oil coated duck and beach)

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Mac Mcgovern

Date: 6/2/2010 12:13:00 PM

Only the beginning. Again man makes nature suffer the result of his greed. Need to send this to BP.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/20/2010 8:25:00 PM

You did a great haiku. Congrats in the winners circle. Luv, andrea

Skat A

Date: 5/19/2010 4:24:00 AM

PERFECT, LUCK IN THE CONTEST,,IRMA

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/18/2010 12:24:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's "Tainted Feathers" contest Doris. Love, Carol

Gert W. Knop

Date: 5/18/2010 4:43:00 AM

Congratulation Doris on your win with this impressive Haiku!...Gert

James Fraser

Date: 5/16/2010 6:20:00 AM

Doris, many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest >> James

John Freeman

Date: 5/14/2010 8:55:00 PM

Congratulations on your success in Raul's contest Doris. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/14/2010 1:12:00 PM

Congrats Doris on your winning poem in Raul's contest .. an amazing win for an equally amazing write... luv.. Linda-Marie

Chuck Keys

Date: 5/14/2010 10:25:00 AM

very enjoyable, relevant. thank you, chuck

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/14/2010 12:15:00 AM

Doris, congratulations on your placement in my Tainted Feathers contest...Raul

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/13/2010 8:51:00 PM

well done Doris, have a nice one, and the best of luck in the contest,..p.d.

Audrey Haick

Date: 5/13/2010 3:28:00 PM

Perfect imagery in your Haiku. Good luck in the contest!..Peace, Audrey

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/13/2010 3:12:00 PM

Great interpertative write about the picture that should do well in the contest...Keep the creative pen flowing...Mom