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Thick sludge upon my wings; sad eyes in need of help Hopeless eyes searching For Raul's contest (Photo of an oil coated duck and beach)

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Date: 6/2/2010 12:13:00 PM
Only the beginning. Again man makes nature suffer the result of his greed. Need to send this to BP.
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Date: 5/20/2010 8:25:00 PM
You did a great haiku. Congrats in the winners circle. Luv, andrea
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Date: 5/19/2010 4:24:00 AM
PERFECT, LUCK IN THE CONTEST,,IRMA
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Date: 5/18/2010 12:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's "Tainted Feathers" contest Doris. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/18/2010 4:43:00 AM
Congratulation Doris on your win with this impressive Haiku!...Gert
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Date: 5/16/2010 6:20:00 AM
Doris, many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest >> James
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Date: 5/14/2010 8:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your success in Raul's contest Doris. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/14/2010 5:44:00 PM
Congrats to you!!!!!!enjoy the win~well deserved!!!!!!!!!!!!Rick
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Date: 5/14/2010 1:12:00 PM
Congrats Doris on your winning poem in Raul's contest .. an amazing win for an equally amazing write... luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 5/14/2010 10:25:00 AM
very enjoyable, relevant. thank you, chuck
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Date: 5/14/2010 12:15:00 AM
Doris, congratulations on your placement in my Tainted Feathers contest...Raul
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Date: 5/13/2010 8:51:00 PM
well done Doris, have a nice one, and the best of luck in the contest,..p.d.
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Date: 5/13/2010 7:52:00 PM
an instant image in my minds eye "hopeless eyes searching" a desperation so vivid~a winner in a losing war against mans greed~!God bless you doris
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Date: 5/13/2010 3:28:00 PM
Perfect imagery in your Haiku. Good luck in the contest!..Peace, Audrey
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Date: 5/13/2010 3:12:00 PM
Great interpertative write about the picture that should do well in the contest...Keep the creative pen flowing...Mom
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