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slow to eat, crawl, climb sloth exemplifies slowness mindfulness on show

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 9/8/2021 8:34:00 PM
John, congratulations on your win in my Nature Haiku Contest with your beautiful Haiku, well done, love the image and your voice ~ peace and tranquility _ Constance
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John Anderson
Date: 9/9/2021 11:16:00 AM
Thanks very much, Cheers
Date: 9/5/2021 8:11:00 PM
Cute one, John. Congrats on the win
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John Anderson
Date: 9/6/2021 12:14:00 PM
Thanks very much. Cheers
Date: 8/13/2021 7:08:00 AM
i think I worked with this guy......Great haiku John
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Date: 8/12/2021 3:12:00 PM
I have seen a sloth in the wild. An interesting animal :)
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John Anderson
Date: 8/12/2021 3:49:00 PM
does moss grow on their fur?
Date: 8/12/2021 3:11:00 PM
Nothing slow about this haiku John, you capture the true nature of the sloth, mindfulness knows exactly what it’s doing, wonderful writing, cheers David
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David Kavanagh
Date: 8/12/2021 3:56:00 PM
No worries John I was juxtaposing it to mindlessness
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John Anderson
Date: 8/12/2021 3:51:00 PM
sorry, I'm not a fan of mindfulness which can be slothful.