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Slowly my problems change for better


My troubles dim over time. 
As I age everything gets well.
I wrote my previous story in a letter for people to tell. 
In the end everything did end swell. 
Eventually my troubles all die. 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/23/2016 10:43:00 PM
Teddy, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/16/2016 11:23:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Teddy. :)
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Date: 6/16/2016 6:21:00 AM
Teddy, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. **SKAT**
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