Slowly

Time passes by slowly so slowly it drives me mad so slowly it chains my body like nothing ever had I count the days They just seem to crawl so cruelly they smash me with cold blood they kill my soul and I die Slowly

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Beata Agustin

Date: 1/5/2022 1:27:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this. May I share with you God's love, expressed in John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/18/2016 11:20:00 AM

Nissreen Dagash, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 12/5/2015 6:16:00 PM

Nissreen,, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**