Slowly

Slowly, as smooth as china silk. Carefully blooming, opening your petals one by one, gracefully. Turning, bending, curving, arching each fragile curves. Gently smiling, unspoken beauty, a beautiful floret in it`s glorious peak. But day goes by day, and our flower, like all that lives, must wither away. just as slowly as it blossomed, it wilts and crumbles so. The beauty of such life, where life fades and wanes slowly.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/20/2014 6:20:00 AM
Wonderful write and congrats on your poem being featured this week, genevieve
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Date: 4/14/2014 4:42:00 PM
Very Zen. I liked it.
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Date: 4/14/2014 12:40:00 PM
very neat poem and layout. congrats on being featured ;) good job
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Date: 12/7/2011 6:35:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope to be back soon to read more Genevieve. This time of year we all are so busy and I for one don't have a lot of time right now but I will try. I love reading the poetry of the many talented poets here at the Soup. Hope to be reading your poetry for many more years to come. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us and may you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/7/2011 6:13:00 AM
Thank you for the wonderful comments :)
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Date: 12/6/2011 1:24:00 PM
Genevieve very nice layout and good struture all the way through..David
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Date: 12/6/2011 10:44:00 AM
* "GOOD MORNING AGAIN MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL GENEVIEVE * LOVE YOUR PRETTY LAYOUT MY DEAR * THIS PAINTING MAKES MYSELF REFLECT UPON THE FRAILITY OF TEMPORALS MOMENT IN FLESH * ALBEIT VERY LOVELY WITH ITS FRAGRAT SOFT SILKENED PETALS UNFOLDING * TO BE CHAINED AMID LACKFUL VISION UNTO THIS BUT A SEASON IN TIME * WOULD BE REGRETFUL UNTO THOSE WHOM REMAIN SO BLIND * LET US GRASP ETERNITY AMID THE TRUTH IN SPIRIT * THEN WE SHALL SOAR * VERY STIRRING MY PRECIOUS HEART * MY LUV ALWAYS * SARAH." *
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