Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

Slowing

My latest diet technique is “fasting” for 12 hours
Each and every day, not a damn thing I devour
Takes great dedication
And strong motivation
More like “slowing” but results still empower

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Silent One March 5, 2018 at 7:21 AM You dont need to diet, eat what you want and be happy!!! go for a sea food diet.. sea food and eat it :) Jack Ellison March 5, 2018 at 7:28 AM But must stay focused... down close to 60 pounds!!! Aren't you proud??? BTW "sea food and eat it" that's not original!!! LOL I'm on to you!

Tom Cunningham March 3, 2018 at 8:46 AM Haha , why is all the nice food fattening, or why can't lettuce taste like a burger and fries. Jack Ellison March 3, 2018 at 1:52 PM I'm really into the healthy stuff now!!! The results are totally mazing Tom!!!