Slow Stream, No Dream

Of late
No spate

Flow rate
Not great

Two trips
Just drips

Still urge
To purge

Turn, toss
Sleep loss

Do care,
Eight rare

Doc backs
Flowmax

True fact:
Clear tract

Unfroze
Fire hose

All night 
Sleep right

Pee great,
See straight!

Big grin,
Sleep win!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Wolf Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 11:36 PM
This one certainly resonates! ~ Yu Wrinn
Kyser Avatar
March 8, 2022 at 3:32 AM
if a thing is going to be ignoble, it might as well be poetically so, right?
Hankins Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 7:45 PM
(chuckling) What can I say? I know this scene very well!!!!
Kyser Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 7:47 PM
I’ve seen two shows recently where they used the line that they peed in Morse code! Guess it is ubiquitous
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