Slow Sink

It wasn’t who I was;  
I had become a stranger in my own skin.  
No one was willing to help me;  
I was under the shelter of gathering darkness.

It wasn’t who I was;  
I could barely afford a good meal.  
It felt like climbing a steep hill,  
A journey through a withered meadow.

My son didn’t want to come close.  
I turned to look at him and saw him turn away.  
I sat alone on the porch at twilight;  
Sadness weighed down the boat of my being.

I soar on the wings of dawn;  
I walk into the morning light, filled with awakening hope.  
A slow sink is not a shadow symphony,  
If only hope could be buoyed from being submerged.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Ibeh Avatar
September 9, 2026 at 8:20 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this fabulous poem, Thompson👍😊. I loved it!
Emate Avatar
September 19, 2026 at 8:21 AM
Thank you, Edward. It's an honour.
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