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Edward Ibeh's This Or That, Vol. 40 Contest...19 Aug 26

Slow Sink

Few years ago, I drifted on a wetland
swiveling through the pewter 
of evening as contours of statelv herons
 unfolded...velvety the feathers white,
 and ablaze by clear Asian ripples of before.

Yet, from a visit today, my eyes
follow them along weeds...
their poses now limp from a gray night 
through rows of frail blooms, fumbling
 along a marsh looking old; 
their feet throttling in slow sink of  motion
against those once radiant plumes:

In quiet reflection, I imagine 
these birds' pliqht amidst 
nature's environ , steeped in frail
passages of late life stages unattended:

How I weep for these herons' destination
 beyond soiled grasses
as I wrap my fingers in prayer, 
relishing this instance where 
I gaze at an avian delight,
slowly yet wondrously aging through my eyes.
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Ibeh Avatar
September 9, 2026 at 8:10 AM
Such a fantastic poem, Nette👍😊Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest!
Gasun Avatar
August 20, 2026 at 7:45 AM
Beautifully sad my dear poet friend Nette. Your pen shines always. Love this a lot. All the best in the contest. Hugs
Smith  Avatar
August 19, 2026 at 4:41 PM
This is a sad slow sink.
Onat Avatar
August 19, 2026 at 3:35 PM
Hoping we can age slowly and gracefully. Grand piece.
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