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Slow Morning

Slowly the blue sky Appears from cold morning clouds Neighbors start their cars

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/9/2008 5:45:00 AM
wow that was so pure and beautiful. Love, Chitra
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Date: 10/8/2008 8:57:00 AM
And the the day revs-up , Jim ... Well presented in perfect 5~7~5 flow ...
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Date: 10/8/2008 7:47:00 AM
The never ending cycle of days is well written in this Haiku - Great Job and God Bless
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