Slow Morning

Slowly the blue sky
Appears from cold morning clouds
Neighbors start their cars
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Lakhera Avatar
October 9, 2008 at 5:45 AM
wow that was so pure and beautiful. Love, Chitra
Kelly Avatar
October 8, 2008 at 8:57 AM
And the the day revs-up , Jim ... Well presented in perfect 5~7~5 flow ...
Jordan Avatar
October 8, 2008 at 7:47 AM
The never ending cycle of days is well written in this Haiku - Great Job and God Bless
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