Kris Walters Poet Triolet

Slow Leak

There is a well that will not fill
despite abundant waters flow
and though the shimmer stars shine still,
there is a well that will not fill.
I claw along and bide until
a ray breaks through, but yet I know
there is a well that will not fill
despite abundant waters flow.

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Skat A September 20, 2010 at 7:23 PM A lovely and enjoyable poem. Take care*LV~SKAT

Wilma Neels August 8, 2010 at 8:42 AM Another gem and such a joy to read this Sunday afternoon.. Thank you for taking the time out to comment on mine as well Kris, hope you are enjoying your time on Soup *hugs*

Joyce Johnson August 6, 2010 at 6:31 PM Lovely triolet. Flows nicely. Thank you for your comments. Welcome to the Soup. Love, Joyce

Kabuteng P.Ink K. August 4, 2010 at 1:39 AM Wow, you sure are talented Kris, I am going through your writes and each one is a gem indeed! This really flowed well and I enjoyed the sprinkling of alliteration too-- wonderful triolet! I could only hope to write one as nice as this! - nikko :)

Sharon Tideswell August 3, 2010 at 6:48 AM Kris, I love your writing. You seem to have an innate ability to write to strict form, yet allow your words to flow completely naturally. You give me something to aspire to as a writer. This triolet is just superb. Glad you joined the Soup ~ Sharon :)

Andrea Dietrich August 2, 2010 at 8:34 PM Hey, you can really write a triolet, Kris. I don't recognize this as one from my contest on movie scene triolets. HAve you done many triolets? Luv,Andrea