Slow Drip Drops

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It started raining here on Thursday night..It has been raining, cloudy, foggy, damp, cool, and cold since..Four days now..Sara
Solid clouds enveloped early morn sky
Lightning bolt flashed blindingly bright
Seemed right in front of my eyes and did fly
Scary thought that it could hit filled with fright

Could not force myself inside to safety
Had to take it all in_nitrogen air
Thunder; but did not see that bolt unsafety
Remain here when reason says go in to care

There is something about a winter storm 
Same as  summer but out of season now
Will things be greener like spring thunderstorm
Always refreshing to see how they grow

Clouds moving at a very fast pace now
Blue sky appearing in the west drip drop slow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 1/25/2012 2:10:00 AM
Will things be greener like spring thunderstorm... simply fantastic! somehow a romantic feeling emerge from this poem
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Date: 1/24/2012 6:53:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments on my writings Sara. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/23/2012 2:15:00 PM
My, that weather sure gave you inspiration, my friend. I love these pieces
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Date: 1/23/2012 8:33:00 AM
Slow drip drop indicates the monsoon of life changes from time to time. Wonderful poem read and enjoyed,loved, bl
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Date: 1/22/2012 2:54:00 PM
can relate to this sara, enjoyed this. although scary
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Date: 1/22/2012 2:30:00 PM
I can be very frightened of the stronger thunderstorms. The lightning can be extremely dangerous, as you said, you might want to find safety! This is a fabulous sonnet Sara! Awesome Work!!
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Date: 1/22/2012 2:02:00 PM
Enjoyed my visit thank you Sara . Declan xx
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