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Slow Draw

He was a gunfighter so they say And his life ended thataway On his tombstone where he lay Tells us where one might stay Living day to day Facing gunplay And not pray - Cold grey Clay 11-1-19 Contest: Rhyming Nonet Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Date: 11/16/2019 11:58:00 AM
way to go with that win, Larry. Congratulations.
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Date: 11/14/2019 1:17:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great winning poem, Larry :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/13/2019 7:43:00 PM
Larry, you always seem to hit the right buttons in my contests. Love this write, as I love most of your writes. Congratulations my friend on your high placement in my contest. Thanks for entering. Charlie
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/13/2019 10:05:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie..and thank you for the placement. A really fun and challenging contest!!
Date: 11/2/2019 2:48:00 PM
You know the slow draw was a fatal flaw in the gunslinger I saw. Awww... Neat little poem, Larry. lol
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/2/2019 4:54:00 PM
LOL..We should collaborate on gunslingers someday!

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