Slow Down, Smell the Roses

Whoa! Friends, slow down a bit, smell the roses
And appreciate your situations.
We can’t lose sight what’s under our noses
If we do, we invite our frustrations.
Who needs that god-awful discouragement?
Not you or me, so look for the flowers,
They are there. Look around, follow the scent 
But don’t look in other people’s bowers
You have plenty more in your own backyard.
Now take a whiff and thank your lucky stars
For these gifts, you have earned this high regard.
That’s right my friends, give yourselves a cigar.
Over the years we sowed what we reaped
Its harvest time now, the roses smell sweet.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Ahearn Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 7:59 PM
Thank you PD.
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August 11, 2013 at 7:57 PM
T hank you Anne.
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August 11, 2013 at 10:58 AM
- Congratulations on having your poem featured on the homepage "Featured Poem of the Week" - Have a nice day, Albert. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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August 11, 2013 at 7:10 AM
Hello Albert, , '''CONGRATULATIONS''' On your featured poem of the week... Have yourself a nice and beautiful Sunday... -XOX- Love Linda
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August 8, 2013 at 10:29 AM
Thank you, shadow.
Hamilton Avatar
August 8, 2013 at 8:29 AM
lovely Albert congrats on being featured Shadow x smiles
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August 8, 2013 at 6:30 AM
I hope you did, April. Thank you for commenting.
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August 8, 2013 at 5:40 AM
Thank you Laura.
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August 6, 2013 at 8:51 PM
Congrats on your featured piece great advice! Laura :)
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May 31, 2009 at 12:51 PM
Thank you very much for your kind comment.
Adeite Avatar
May 31, 2009 at 11:06 AM
Hmm, this is awesome and creative. we all need to look at the bright side and thank God for everything that comes our way. we don't need to compare ourself to others... keep writing. you are great.
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