Slow Down

The rules of old are rearranging 
Today’s times are changing 
Every person is in acceleration
In this act now think later society/rationality

Why cant we just slow down
Take a long look around 
To see what we are missen
And go back to the days of reminiscen/reminiscing
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Owens Avatar
August 4, 2009 at 1:05 PM
I like it its got a good vibe to it it sounds more like a chorus to me than a main verse though just a thought
Montgomery Avatar
January 16, 2009 at 8:14 AM
Hmmmm... I write songs too.. maybe I could help..
Crosby Avatar
December 3, 2008 at 10:07 AM
Every time i try to write a song i get stuck and this is the beging of one of my want to be songs and if yall could help me i would gratley be in deep gratitude--country boy
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