Evelyn Judy Buehler Poet Tanka

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Slow Dancers

In shadows of blue
clouds slow dance across the skies
Tender sunlight dream
follows mute, chronic drifters
round and round the blooming world

O'er shady forests
desert flowers and green seas
blithe homes and fast cars
Greeting fields of lavender
and redbirds of tomorrow

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Harry Horsman September 15, 2022 at 11:59 PM Slow Dancers indeed, A waltz to Rock 'n' Roll, a need like the redbirds of tomorrow Evelyn. Love your tankas. Evelyn Judy Buehler September 16, 2022 at 9:27 AM Thank you for your delightful comments, Harry. :)

Gershon Wolf September 15, 2022 at 7:29 PM The flow is poesy-perfect, Evelyn. This one drifts right across the sky and into my FAVES. Thank you! ~ Gershon Evelyn Judy Buehler September 15, 2022 at 8:26 PM Thank you so much for the fine compliments, and for the joy of your FAVE, Gershon. Blessings.

Elizabeth Mccann September 15, 2022 at 3:41 AM I love the idea- slow dancers! Elizabeth Evelyn Judy Buehler September 15, 2022 at 11:33 AM Thank you for your kind appreciation, Elizabeth. :)

Victor Buhagiar September 15, 2022 at 1:15 AM Looks like a movie with wonderful vistas coming and going. Evelyn Judy Buehler September 15, 2022 at 11:34 AM Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you. :)