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In shadows of blue clouds slow dance across the skies Tender sunlight dream follows mute, chronic drifters round and round the blooming world O'er shady forests desert flowers and green seas blithe homes and fast cars Greeting fields of lavender and redbirds of tomorrow

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Date: 9/15/2022 11:59:00 PM
Slow Dancers indeed, A waltz to Rock 'n' Roll, a need like the redbirds of tomorrow Evelyn. Love your tankas.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/16/2022 9:27:00 AM
Thank you for your delightful comments, Harry. :)
Date: 9/15/2022 7:29:00 PM
The flow is poesy-perfect, Evelyn. This one drifts right across the sky and into my FAVES. Thank you! ~ Gershon
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/15/2022 8:26:00 PM
Thank you so much for the fine compliments, and for the joy of your FAVE, Gershon. Blessings.
Date: 9/15/2022 3:41:00 AM
I love the idea- slow dancers! Elizabeth
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/15/2022 11:33:00 AM
Thank you for your kind appreciation, Elizabeth. :)
Date: 9/15/2022 1:15:00 AM
Looks like a movie with wonderful vistas coming and going.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/15/2022 11:34:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you. :)

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